Review Notes

...from meeting with Misha today:

shot 09 -- lose the moving camera. In general, remember what the camera movement conveys -- a moving camera may add interest, but a static camera can build tension. And if the character is already moving a lot, and that's the focus, then the moving camera detracts more than adds.

shot 11 -- may be able to cut. Too bad it's an easy shot.

My notes:

shot 12 -- old another second

shot 17 -- the initial stabbing of calculator is funny, but take down the later ones so they have less anticipation, become these tense little movements. Will also help to sell losing grip on pencil.

shot 21 -- add 5 frames pause before ollie gets the pencil. Make his grip disdainful, like he's picking up a pencil-shaped turd.